Monday, May 23, 2011

The Giggling Girls by Brianna Abrego


Read  the following story.  Based on what you know about urban legends, does this qualify as an urban legend?  Why or why not?


It was cloudy and spooky that day. Dried leaves lay all over the streets and lawns. You could see the moon approaching from behind the dead dry trees.

"The Woodrow house" Maggie Parker said in her best scary voice. Her and her friends Allison Sampson and Anna Anderson were standing outside the house, looking at it from the empty sidewalk. It gave them chills just looking at it. Full of dust. Deserted. No sign of life coming from inside it.
Seeing that her scary voice didn't scare her friends, she tried something different.

"You know, as the story goes, a family moved there. A happy family.  Happy just like the Brady Bunch. The Woodrow twins were part of the family. Aly and Carly Woodrow loved running around in the house because of how big it is.  But something happened.  When they were walking in the house one day, on a full moon, they fell ... right into the furnace in the basement.  The floor had snapped from under them ... SNAP!!!! They were burned and cut up to death.  Aly was holding a doll when she died,  Carly was holding her stuffed bear. Their parents found them, dead. But right when they looked at the kids, burnt and all, the twins eyes shot open .
Their eyes were glowing red.  Like fire.  They got up and grabbed a crowbar from the side of the furnace and killed their parents.  You can still hear their giggles as they skip through the house holding their doll and stuffed bear singing "Ring Around the Rosie."  Legend has it that people keep disappearing when they go in there, like the girls are still there, waiting to kill."  Magggie told them.  Allison's eyes were huge by the time the story was finished, but Anna kept a skeptial look.  She began to walk toward the house, closer and closer until they realized ...realized that she was walking towards the door.  They chased after her.
"Anna, what the heck are doing?!" Allison screamed.
"Al , I'm not buying this ! It's not true - none of it is true!" Anna screamed.
"Don't go in there," Maggie told her.
Anna sighed. "I'm just going to look through the door window," she told them .
She walked closer to the door and looked in.  No sign of life. But there was something, a feeling. Like something was in there. Waiting for you.  The door opened by itself and Anna flew in there, the door slamming shut.
"Oh God , it's locked!  Anna , if this is a joke I'll break your teeth," Maggie screamed.  She was both angry and scared.  Both of them looked into the house.  There was no one in there.
SLAM !!!!!! Anna's freaked out face appeared banging on the door window .
" OPEN THE DOOR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DEAR LORD , OPEN THE DOOR," She screamed banging as hard as she could on the door.
"It's locked ! We can't ," Allison yelled to her.
"Hold on," Maggie screamed.  But Anna's face disappeared.  Maggie looked to her side, Allison had fainted. " Dang it Allison, wake up," she said helping her up . They both ran as fast as they could to the neighbor's house and called the police.
Anna proceded down the hall. She looked in front of her when she heard a sound.  A song.
"Ring around the rosies, a pocket full of possies, ashes, ashes, we all fall down."
Anna's eyes turn wide with fear when she heard another line of the song.
"Burning in the furnace, we stabbed and killed our parents, burning, dead girls, you will die too!"
When she looked forward, she saw two girls. One holding a doll , the other holding a teddy bear. They were burned. Scratched up and burned so much that you could hardly make out the details of their faces. Their eyes were sunken in and glowing red.  FIRE red.
"Ring around the rosies, a pocket full of posies, ashes, ashes, we all fall down."
Everything went black.  Anna woke up again.  Looking around in panic, she discovered she was in a basement.
The girls were with her. With a crowbar in their hands.
Anna pulled out her asthma inhaler, not knowing what she would do with it, how the heck can you hold off two ghosts with medication   But it was too late.
"She was our best friend . The police and us found her body , scratched up and bloody . Her inhaler in her hand . We had no idea that it would happen . Not like that . We just can't believe it ." Maggie Parker explained. 
"We didn't know that the story was true. We thought it was just any ordinary house. But it's not. Evil lurks in that house. We lost our best friend to evil." Allison Sampson added crying .
They were on a radio show.
Anna Anderson had lived an overall good life.  But only up to the age of sixteen.  No one knows where she is now.  In the house?  Up above?  Down below?
No one knows.

source: http://www.short-stories-help-children.com/the-giggling-girls.html
*typos and grammatical errors are those of the original author

45 comments:

  1. I don't think so because it is not a well known story plus the fact if she really died then it is true

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  2. Christopher walker

    It doesn't sound like an urban legend it was more of a horror book to me.

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  3. ~Kimberly Jones :]

    I do not think it is an urban legend because it sounded like a suspense scary story instead of an urban legend but if those kids really came on T.V and the girl died then i guess it is true. :/

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  4. I think this is an urban legend be cause An urban legend is an apocryphal, secondhand story, told as true and just plausible enough to be believed, about some horrific, embarrassing, ironic or exasperating series of events that supposedly happened to a real person. so i think it is

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  5. Michelle Chan

    Yes, I think that it is an urban legend because an urban legend is an "circulating untrue story," this is deffinitly a story, it circulated because, if it did'nt, Maggie Parker would've never heard of it. And if its untrue or not, thats for the reader to decide.

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  6. I think this is an urban legend because it sounded like a scary story or something an author would make up. They did say that it was her sister,brother,[friend],cousin,etc. It isn't credible enough to believe that it is true.

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  8. Brittany Jones

    Based on what I know about urban legends, I think this story is an urban legend because an urban legend has elements of humor, moralizing, or horror in it. In this story, there is horror definitly in it because the story is talking about how a house is haunted by two little girls who were burnt by fire and are killing people everytime somebody walks inside the house where the two girls are.

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  9. I think it is an urban legend because with the horror in it it sounds like a story made in the culture of today. Back in the day people could not even imagine the stuff people come up wit today.

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  10. I think this is an urban legend because their was suspence to it and it actually happened to Anna.

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  11. katherine e cortez

    --- i dont think this is an urban legend because Urban legends are popular stories that are said to be true. which, in the story and other storys aswell, always seem to happen to someone other than the teller.

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  13. Evelyn Melendez
    ....I don't think this is urban legend because it clearly states many horror phrases but still a little suspenseful in a way.But yeah i think it is an urban legend.

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  14. Evelyn Melendez
    ...I do think this is urban legend because it clearly states many horror phrases but still a little suspenseful in a way.But yeah i think it is an urban legend.

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  15. i think it is a urban legend because urban legends were meant to be believable and this story (in my perspective) is believable.

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  16. An urban legend is something like a little scary myth that is made to try and scare people when they tell the story to others but they aren't usually scary at all and i dont think they are ever true. So i think this IS an urban myth.

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  17. I think it is not a urban legend because it has a spooky ring to it.

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  18. I think this is a horror story that contains an urban legend

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  19. The story Maggie told in this story could have been an urban legend, but it sounds like she just made it up right on the spot, it wasn't passed down through people in the area. However, "The Giggling Girls" could be an urban legend about an urban legend. I think you could look at it in a few different ways. In my opinion, it is more of a scary story than an urban legend.

    Mary Wester

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  20. Yes it is an urban ledgend because the reader decides if it is true and it was cerculated and not written for a while thats why she said you know the story of that house.

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  21. Phuong Tran
    "The Giggling Girls" stoy that Maggie told was an Urban Legend because it was passed around story with elements of horror. However I don't think that the story about Anna was an urban legend because there was no no indication that it was being passed around. Also it's not in the format of a regular urban legend. The story is also allegedly true according to her friends on the radio show.

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  22. To Me this story was okay, i dont think is an urban legend , if it were there would be a mean to it like , ohh this happends because you do this and that, well its my responce to yeah .to me its mpre of a scary story .
    Katherine M Cortez

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  23. This is an urban legend because, in the story Maggie was trying to scare Anna and Allison by telling them a made up story not knowing in the end it was true. Only one of the girls believed in the urban legend which was Allison. An urban legend may also include horrific events or a series of events happening to a real person.
    -Mikaela Dunwell

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  24. Christina Sutton
    It's not an urban legend because the person telling the story just made everything up on the spot, an urban legend is a story that is old and many people seem to believe it.

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  25. Shahi Settles Reynolds

    No because it dosent have all the things that an urban legend have. This is just a regular
    story.

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  26. It's not an urban legend because the person telling the story made it up because it is a thing that makes people want to believe in the story

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  27. REBECCA BAILEY
    Well... I don't think it's a legend. It's not passed down through generations. I think it's just a scary story.

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  28. Chanel Person
    I think this is an urban legend because this story is told to believed by many people today. It is also said to have happened to a real person.

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  29. I don't think that this story would qualify as an urban legend because they are the only people who know it and it wasn't passed down from generation to generation.

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  30. I dont think this story is an urban legend because the story references horror but urban legends usually told from generation to generation and i didnt see any indication that it was.

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  31. Ravendra Nand

    I think this story is an urban legend because Maggie was telling a true scary story and Anna thought it was fake. And an urban legend is when someone tells a story that could be true and scary

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  32. I think that it is an urban legend because in an urban legend someone has to tell a story that could be true.That person in this particular story was Maggie.

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  33. Vidhi Patel

    I think it isn't an Urban Legend because i don't think it has been passed down for generations. I think its just a scary story.

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  35. I don't think this is an urban legend because not all legends are real and the story doesn't make a lot of sense when the girls who had been haunting the house had come to kill others even though the people had meant no harm.
    -ELIZABETH GILMORE

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  36. I don't think it's an urban legend because this story seems made-up and is just a story that is recently made up. So it cant be an urban legend because urban legends are past down from time to time.

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  37. I say this is an urban legend because an urban legend is a story that can be true but has no proof that it happened.


    -Daniel Moreno

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  38. I think it is true because the girl really died in the story . Also where people die are not the safes places two be so I think anything could have happen.

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  39. I think this story is not an urban legend because it is not well known around the world and it's only in one place. An urban legends have been told from a long time ago and have been passed down to children. This story seems like it has just been created. At least thats what i think

    Walter Gonzalez

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  40. i think this isnt an urban legend becuase urban legends are more scary than this. this is more like a story that isnt a remender from the past.

    ANN GILMORE

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  41. i think this isnt an urban legend becuase urban legends are more scary than this. this is more like a story that isnt a remender from the past.

    ANN GILMORE

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  42. krunal patel
    Yes i thing this is urban legend because urban legend is scard and this story is so scary.

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  43. Leke Ajenifuja
    I think it could be an urban legend, but it didnt seem like it was passed down for a period of time. I think that there was an uban legend in the story but not completely the whole story itself.

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  44. Eduardo Martinez

    This I think cam be an urban legend. For one, it shows people who seem to have things that exist now such as an asthma inhaler. Second it can be a legend because things like legends and myths have two purposes: To explain a natural phenomonon, or entertain you. Seeing this, it is to entertain.

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